Welcome Note Samples What Do You Think Of My Writing?

What do you think of my writing? - welcome note samples

I am 14 years old, but I wrote a book of fiction. I love writing and I wanted to know what you think. Here's an example:

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"Hello Ben," she smiles. He wore a jean skirt with a white blouse. Her black hair of medium length, which ended in several down, fell on his shoulder.
I returned his smile, "Hello, Ashley."
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What do you think? Criticism and suggestions are welcome!



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